Greg was having a very hard time coming up with idea for our new writing unit, poetry. He sat there and sat there, peddling away on his peddles (the seat he had chosen for the day). “I’ve got nothing,” he kept saying.
I had taught Greg’s older sister several years ago, so I dug deep and remembered a poem she had written way back when and shared with Greg that experience. It was a poem to the tune of “Mary had a Little Lamb.” He still looked at me confused. So (because of blogging) I dug into my own writing notebook and found a poem I had written to the same tune to share with him.
By this point a handful of students were intrigued to see what my notebook held and had stopped writing to listen…
Elena was a swimming star
swimming star
swimming star…
“Wow! I like it,” Greg said when I finished. “But I’ve still got no ideas.”
Without skipping a beat, Greg’s bff yells, “I know! You’re poem can go like this…
Greeeg doesn’t write
doesn’t write
doesn’t write
Greeeg doesn’t write
so he’s got no ideas.”
I busted out laughing. I couldn’t help it. Maybe not the most appropriate reaction but it was genuine. Many students looked at me confused at why I was laughing so hard (they had missed the poem).
I looked up to see Greg’s reaction. Luckily, it was the same as mine. He liked his bff’s creativity. “Hmmmm…. I like it. But I have to create it… not you!”
And the next day he produced not one but two poems to the same tune.
Look at you pulling out your own mentor text and also thinking back years ago to what his sister wrote. You’re growing a writer. So we’re that G’s friends are also stepping in to help.
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This is the power of being a teacher and a writer! How cool is it that you could pull out your own writing and share. The BFFs poem is so good, and I love Greg’s reaction – he likes it, but it has to be his own! Here’s to teachers as writers!
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It’s not just that it’s a strategy to write but that it’s one you have used. That’s why to teach writing, we need to write!
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You captured the perfect writer’s block moment! Sounds like you’ve got some tricks up your sleeve to help out in times like these.
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This was a wonderful piece to read this Sunday. I chuckled.
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